first draft and audience feedback

This is the our 1st draft for our video, we have quite a few areas to fix, i have spoken and shown a few people this video and they have told me areas we need to work on,
for instance:-
-stretched sam whilst waving the flag
-improved colour show, when dust is thrown
-same effect on drum every time
timing issues with drum hit and guss singing

we have also done some audience research and got some feedback off them to help improve our video.